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Title: Mornings can be tough.
Author: lilyfarfalla
Characters: Rodney, Teyla
Spoilers: Super general Season 4 stuff.
Warnings: none
Words: 416
Rating: PG
Summary: See title.
Prompt: coffee
A/N: Credit goes to [livejournal.com profile] esteefee   for being brilliant about follow up, and to cold medicine, for keeping me going this long. (Blame for stilted dialogue and any other mistakes goes solely to the cold medicine wearing off.)

When Rodney stumbled into the mess the morning after another night spent saving the city, he was surprised to see Teyla staring blankly at the wall with a bowl of chuvi fruit in one hand.  Well, maybe he didn’t see her so much as walk straight into her on his way towards the coffee, but it was definitely a surprise.

They exchanged ‘Oofs’, and Rodney handwaved something that he hoped translated into “Must get coffee. Will apologize after.” Teyla nodded and must have understood his gesturing, because she was sitting at the team’s table when Rodney returned with his sweet sweet nectar.

“Sweet sweet nectar,” he crooned.

Across the table, Teyla was again staring off into the distance.  Were those bags under her eyes, Rodney wondered?  He took another sip of coffee.  Teyla continued to stare into the distance.  She was holding a spoon in the bowl, but had made no move to bring the fruit to her mouth.

“Teyla?” he said.

She focused in on his face and smiled tiredly.

“I am sorry Rodney. Torren has been unable to sleep for more than two hours at a time for the last week, and I believe the lack of sustained rest has finally caught up with me.”
 
Rodney nodded.  “Our first year in Atlantis, I couldn’t sleep more than two hours a night either.”

Teyla raised an eyebrow at him.

“Oh, no no no no!  I just meant, I know what it’s like, not getting any sleep.  Thank god for coffee though.”

Teyla was grinning now, which made Rodney feel suddenly warm all over. Here was Teyla, being tired and smiling at him in the mess hall. It was maybe more wonderful than coffee.

“It is amazing that it continues to give you such energy. My morning tea is a comforting ritual, but…” she trailed off.

Rodney sat up straight.

“Teyla,” he said. “Are you telling me that you have not tried drinking coffee in the mornings? Because if so,” at this he raised his voice, “You are about to have a life changing experience.”

Teyla was visibly holding back laughter now, but she waited patiently while Rodney went to get a small cup for her and sweetened it with just a hint of sugar (beginners coffee, he thought to himself). And when Rodney brought the drink back to their table, and she raised the cup to his mug and said, “To waking up.”

And Rodney gently chinked their mugs together and solemnly replied, “Hear hear."

Date: 2011-05-29 05:47 am (UTC)
esteefee: Shep with raised eyebrows and the caption Buh? (buh)
From: [personal profile] esteefee
hahaha, "beginner's coffee" for Teyla. ::dies:: Oh, Rodney, what have you wrought.

I love their little collision and Rodney's mime-o-apology.

(I'm adding tags for you. and I guess I should add pairing and rating tags. wee!)

Date: 2011-05-29 06:55 am (UTC)
esteefee: Shep pointing his Beretta at the camera. (big_gun)
From: [personal profile] esteefee
done!

Date: 2011-05-29 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stella-pegasi.livejournal.com
Oh...delightful...we don't get enough of Rodney being the good guy and trying to help. I can relate...must have morning coffee!! Really nice story!

Date: 2011-05-29 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trystings.livejournal.com
This coffee prompt is pretty perfect for my Sunday morning. I'm on my third cup. :D

And Rodney's "beginners coffee" is ♥

Date: 2011-05-29 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mific.livejournal.com
That Rodney - he's an enabler! Nice fic.

Date: 2011-05-29 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stargatesg1971.livejournal.com
Cute...beginners coffee *g*

Date: 2011-05-30 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceitie.livejournal.com
Aw, Rodney, sharing the coffee love with Teyla.

Date: 2011-05-30 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-1459.livejournal.com
This was awesome! What a lovely little quiet moment between Rodney and Teyla. And I love Rodney introducing Teyla into the benefits of caffeine now that motherhood is upon her.

Lovely.

Date: 2011-05-30 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patk.livejournal.com
>>They exchanged ‘Oofs’, and Rodney handwaved something that he hoped translated into “Must get coffee. Will apologize after.” <<

Best scene description! *g* I can very vividly see this in my mind. :-)

Date: 2011-05-31 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ozsaur.livejournal.com
Beginner's coffee! heeeeee!

Very cute!

Date: 2011-06-04 10:33 am (UTC)
trillingstar: walkabout | Harold, head bent down, playing the guitar as he walks in the countryside. Reads: Sing Out (sga team walking)
From: [personal profile] trillingstar
Beginner's coffee! LOL. Lovely interaction between these two.

Date: 2011-06-05 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saffronhouse.livejournal.com
Teyla smiling at him! Lovely, lovely.

Date: 2011-07-01 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michelel72.livejournal.com
Awww, this is adorable.

Date: 2011-08-14 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] hoktauri
I loved this! Esp this part here: Teyla nodded and must have understood his gesturing, because she was sitting at the team’s table when Rodney returned with his sweet sweet nectar.

“Sweet sweet nectar,” he crooned.
I love that it shows Rodney just *saying* exactly what's on his mind.

And this part: Teyla was grinning now, which made Rodney feel suddenly warm all over. Here was Teyla, being tired and smiling at him in the mess hall. It was maybe more wonderful than coffee. To which I said, "Awww, YAY!" I love this little moment b/t Rodney and Teyla. They never got enough friendship moments on the show.

Three cheers and a "Hear, hear!" for this story!

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