Date: 2011-06-24 05:02 am (UTC)
esteefee: Shep pointing his Beretta at the camera. (big_gun)
From: [personal profile] esteefee
omg! omg I loved this so much. I love Dave stories anyway, but your character Cindy was awesome! and I loved so much how you fleshed out John and Dave's childhood disagreements and made the schism between them so believable. Their two perspectives are so realistic and in the hindsight of adulthood, resolvable. They are two good men, and I'm so pleased to see them brothers again \o/.

No matter where he ended up, he had people he could turn to, people who cared about him. People who bought him hideous orange shirts.

The way you filled the prompt! ::eees with glee:: So hilarious, and then the scene in the restaurant was just awesome BAMF action. AND NO MORE HIDEOUS SHIRT! Of COURSE that was my first thought--well, actually, since I adore seeing John get shot, it was my second thought. I'm so terrible that way.

Thank you for sharing this marvelous story with us!
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org

Profile

SGA Saturday

June 2025

S M T W T F S
1234567
891011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728
2930     

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 20th, 2025 05:05 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios