Yes! Great to see another story from you. I love the way you write SGA and this was just a good, fun, h/c brotherly love story. I read this a couple of days ago and then something came up and I remembered later that I hadn't left a comment. Then I went back to comment and couldn't find the story! I thought I was losing my mind, but here it is!! Mind, maybe is still lost, but not because of its inability to locate and comment on this story.
The hideous orange shirt cracked me up! Reminded me of a hideous red and black shirt my brother had - he thought it was creat. The rest of groaned in despair every time it made an appearance. I could totally picture Dave getting his kids all excited about the shirt so that John would have to act like he liked it and not hurt their feelings. That was perfectly captured! Great, intense scene in the restaurant too, where Dave got to see John in action. There are just not enough John and Dave stories out there! Thank you for writing this and filling my need for John and Dave stories (I've got my own brother story brewing in my head, and this just makes me want to write it all the more!!)
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The hideous orange shirt cracked me up! Reminded me of a hideous red and black shirt my brother had - he thought it was creat. The rest of groaned in despair every time it made an appearance. I could totally picture Dave getting his kids all excited about the shirt so that John would have to act like he liked it and not hurt their feelings. That was perfectly captured! Great, intense scene in the restaurant too, where Dave got to see John in action. There are just not enough John and Dave stories out there! Thank you for writing this and filling my need for John and Dave stories (I've got my own brother story brewing in my head, and this just makes me want to write it all the more!!)