Oh you are so kind.
I'm so thrilled and touched that you liked it.

I adore the way we can imagine Atlantis now, not constrained by TPB, but just free to make it how we'd like it and for me I don't really like the idea so much of Atlantis being a seperate, sentient being, but more that Atlantis is the most amazing advanced technology and that it links to John the way all the Ancient tech does. But I also imagine that having all that Ancient stuff in John's head would make him kind of dazed and gorgeously overwhealmed and that Rodney would realise that he was jealous.... at least until he had a slice of thtat for himself....which of course he does in the next part...Orange!!!

thank you so much for this lovely comment