*hides under bed!*--hee! No, seriously, I pitched this to the betas and was like, "The readers are going to kill me," but honestly, I think it's complete like this: I mean, I could write the raid on the prison and how they get onto Atlantis and fly back to pegasus, but in fact the key moment of revelation, I think, is that moment when John remembers Rodney. The rest would just be an action adventure movie. :D (Not that that's a bad thing!)