ext_47867 ([identity profile] sherry57.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_saturday 2011-10-08 06:22 am (UTC)

Physical and emotional whump and two prompts in one....you really packed a huge amount of good stuff into this hon!
'Daniel Boone'....yet another good characetr naming of Ronon by Rodney. Sheppard and a biking accident.....kind of refers to RL...like it a lot.
Ronon sparring with Teal'c....I bet Sheppard would have love to have jumped out of the bed to see this!!
Elizabeth coming to try to get Sheppard to stop feeling guilty....stop Sheppard's guilt emotion is basically impossible!! Was she there? Did he dream her? Was it an hallucination? Then Rodney smelling something that reminds him of her....such a nice touch.
It's always a sure thing that when you're the author the story will be a great one...and you've come up with the goods like usual here hon...thanks for a really enjoyable read!

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