Thank you,
I'm glad that you liked it, I am always so worried whether my humour actually is humourous, you know?

And Yes, please by all means if you can, I'd love a beta.
and forgive me for being forward but do you mean for more than just this story?

Because I've never had much luck in the SGA world finding a Beta, and I'm well aware of my appalling spelling and my questionable and often optional grammar