Thank you!! I've missed being able to finish something in a reasonable amount of time - hell, just finish period. This was a fast story and just kind of flowed and I'm thrilled that you liked it. I realize it may not be to everyone's taste.
And that line is wonderful. I waffled on whether to use the lyrics or the poem and chose the lyrics since the song is referred to in the original Bradbury story. I realize that it was a subtle handling of the prompt and I was a bit worried at first, so I'm glad you saw all the orange references. ;D
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And that line is wonderful. I waffled on whether to use the lyrics or the poem and chose the lyrics since the song is referred to in the original Bradbury story. I realize that it was a subtle handling of the prompt and I was a bit worried at first, so I'm glad you saw all the orange references. ;D